Parallelism We are coming with more checks, more fines, more often __ Tagline of Yarra Trams’ (Melbourne) drive against ticket-less travel. Is this catchy l tag line is grammatically wrong ? Hard to believe. Grammarians say it is parallelism ; you should not mix adjectives and nouns in a sequence. Faulty parallelism is when the different elements, though grammatically correct by themselves, do not mesh properly in one sentence. While some parallelism is barely noticeable, others can be quite jarring. Examples of fault parallelism could be: Including gerunds and infinitives in a list Adjectives and nouns in a list Changing from passive voice to active voice or vice versa . Changing from second person to third person arbitrarily Changing from present tense to past tense etc. etc. While it is nobody’s case that all writing must be straight-jacketed into one style and catchy phrasism sho
Tell all the truth Tell it slant Just as lightening explained To children kind Or every man be blind